I've wrote some pretty good stuff and I would love some feedback.

Since my education is limited and I grew up doing all the wrong things, My writing is probably not text book or 100% proper, So help would be appreciated. Help with punctuation and delivery that is, not with Ideas, thoughts or theories, The streets and the hard knocks along with a good dose of the sweet life, here and there, I am well equipped in the idea and theory department..... Thanks -Ryan Gibbons 

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